Wednesday, 11 March 2015

Sophie the Pirate stories

We wrote stories and illustrated Sophie the Pirate's visit to Room 3.


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she wanted her treasure back and we gave ten treasures to Sophie.

By Davlyn


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she was looking for Jolly Roger.

By Eve


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she wanted Jolly Roger and she came with a gun and eye patch and spy glass.

By Isaia


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she was looking for Jolly Roger.

By Lopiseni


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she was looking for Jolly Roger. 

By Nitika


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she was looking for Jolly Roger's treasure.

By T'sai


Sophie the pirate came into Room 3 because she was looking for Jolly Roger's treasure, it was 10 gold coins.

By Taijah


Sophie the pirate came into Room Three because she was looking for Jolly Roger. Jolly Roger had Sophie's treasure.

By Te Koha


Sophie the pirate came into Room three because she was looking for Jolly Roger's treasure, 10 gold coins.

By Terell

17 comments:

  1. Hi Eve,
    I really like the way you have described your picture it is fantastic and great.
    From Lydia and Taonga

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  2. HI Tsai,
    I like the way you drew your pictures of the pirate.
    From Edith and Stephney

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  3. Hi Davlyn,
    We like the way you have tried to sound out your words.

    Soane and Hamish

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  5. Hi,Terell
    I like the way you drew your picture about Sophie and how you described Sophie.
    From Hevani and viliami.

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  6. Hay Isaia,
    I like the way you used detail in your story and your picture.
    You did Great! Keep it up!!!

    From: Levi and Daena

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  7. Hi T'sai,
    You are so lucky T'sai. Mr. Nepia had lots of gold coins to hand out.

    Lydia and Taonga

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  8. hi Isaia
    I like the way that you have try to sound out words.

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  9. Hi Lopiseni
    I like the way you wrote your story in the best way
    By Edith & Stephney

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  10. Hi, Eve
    I like the way you have drew Sophie and jolly roger and you story sounds amazing good work Eve.
    From Hevani and viliami.

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  11. Hi Eve
    I like way you tryed your best with your words.

    By Vinny and Arizona

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  12. I like the way you described how angry pirate can be

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  13. hi eve
    i like yor work keep it up!!.

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  14. Hi room 3
    I like the way how you draw your pictures and how you did your story.
    Keep it up Room 3.

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  15. Hello room 3,
    I like the way you draw the the photo's they look really good keep it up.

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  16. Hello room 3,
    I like the way you draw the the photo's they look really good keep it up.

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  17. Hi Lopiseni,
    i like the way you were being a thinking tool about sophie the parties.I really like the way you you were being a creative knowledge about the parties sophie.
    Keep it up!!!
    I love it!!!
    THANK YOU!!!

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